Nice art, good to see story telling.
The biggest issues I saw were a) the pacing was a bit slow and, of course, b) the written narrative, which has all sorts of problems, from different reading speeds, to miss spelled words, drawing peoples eyes away from the picture and giving no opportunity for inflection.
Definitely get flash if you can ;)
Always good to see some effort put into a early animation! If you haven't figured out onion skins yet, they are always nice. I'm also all for ditching plain white back grounds whenever possible. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for the positive feed back :D
Pretty pictures too. Not really sure why you posted it though...?
ha ha, nice
that's one of the few "first movies" I've actually protected. It was really short, and their movements seemed pretty slow, and there wasn't exactly a story... but you know all that, and it was cute. Nice start.
Thanks for the protect. I was really not trying to be too ambitious with my first.
Thanks for the comment about movement, I think I should have probably bumped up the frame rate a bit. I'll keep that in mind.
And the topics great too. Maybe that's just because I like nuts and squirrels... but anyhow I look forward to the rest!
I like it pretty well. You could probably improve upon the stick figure, give them a little more form and such if you want. Nice job with the music.
I usually hear that they are too thin, I'll fatten them a bit should I make more stick animations.
I heard sound
Sickly entertaining, just what I needed at the moment. Thanks
I love the style and the music
But I'm sure you can do better on the actually claymation... and it was way too short, pictures and music looked like it was building to something and then it just stopped.
I don't like it
Would it be so hard to give them a greater vocabulary? Besides that I suppose it was sickly humorous.
I acctually enjoyed a sprite movie. Good job!
Anyhow your text was hard to read against the background
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